- One day there was a litle girl, her eyes were golden and her hair was white as a fluffy cloud.She weared a little pink dress and loved to pick flowers.One morning her and her sister whos eyes were blue and hair was golden and weared a white dress went for a walk through the woods they called home.Suddenly, the blue-eyed girl named Carisha found a black rose that had blood leaves and a stem that was silver and ended in a sharp point.Carisha and her sister named Acacia went to see their mother.Their mother screamed at seeing the flower and threw it to the kitchen floor."That is a death flower!"Their mom screamed."It will bring you certan death if you have it!"Their mother said as she hid it in the drawer.Later, that night Carisha thought that her sister would kill her with the flower and decided to kill her sister instead.Carisha sneaked into the kitchen and stole the flower.She went back upstairs and stab the end of the flower through Acacias heart.Acacia died in her sleep.As Carisha laughed and laughed with an evil grin the figure of death appeared by Acacia's bedside.He pointed at Carisha and said in an evil voice."By using the flower of death on your sister, you shall die with her." As Carisha ran from death she decided she must die with her sister.As she stopped by the edge of a cliff Carisha said, "If I must die with Acacia then I shall die with her." Those were the last words she said as she jumped off the cliff into the murky deaths below.
- by Xx_T3CHN0_FR3AK_xX |
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- | Submitted on 03/10/2009 |
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- Title: The flower of death
- Artist: Xx_T3CHN0_FR3AK_xX
- Description: This story is about a girl who finds a flower unlike any other,she soon learns that this flower summons her death and she runs from her death,but soon it catches up with her as she kills herself and the flower is left for another victim whos life is overdue.
- Date: 03/10/2009
- Tags: flower death
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Comments (6 Comments)
- TinaRock46 - 10/12/2009
- Its good,depressing but,beautiful at the same time.
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- PoisonousMoonlight - 10/10/2009
- I see you favorites something of mine so I came to see your submission. I found just one grammatical mistake that threw me off. In the 3rd sentence weared ti's not a word.
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- Mutandanstan - 08/27/2009
- I just have to say that some parts were awkward to read and made me reread them not because I didn't understand but because it was written funny
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- Xx_T3CHN0_FR3AK_xX - 07/05/2009
- i kinda rushed on it
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- Sakura okami spirit - 07/05/2009
- all i have to say is proof read your writing before you post it...i saw a lot of grammer mistakes in it..>< but other then that the story line seemed pretty good! i think you should work on it some more! ^^
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- Xx_T3CHN0_FR3AK_xX - 06/09/2009
- okay i know the ending is weird
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