The Scream From The Mirror

• Artist: The Panda Dancer
• Description: ummm I wrote this 1 day..... pleaz don't b scared!!!! it's only a story!!!! :D
• Date: 02/27/2009
• Tags: scream from mirror

I awoke on a eclipse one day, not knowing it was to be the day of my death. I looked in the mirror hanging on my wall to see how bad I looked that morning. Everything seemed to be fine except for my hair, that was all poofed up. I turned around to get my brush and I heard a blood curdling scream from behind me. I looked to see what caused the sound, but there was nothing there......... but my reflection. All of a sudden my reflection turned white and blood was dripping from my eyes, chest, and head. I was so terrified that couldn't say a word, but then I saw my reflection scream again this time louder and more blood dripped from neck and mouth. I was gonna die, but from what? I stared harder into the horror of my death and saw a man laughing behind me, holding a gun to my head as I scream of horror. I turned to see him standing right there with the gun in his hand, his finger trigger. I screamed out fear as he shot me over and over again in the places I was bleeding in the mirror. The only sound left was my scream as the sun appeared from the eclipse.

Comments

[boo beetle]

Not only was it not scary, but it was poorly written.
You use too many punctuations and sentence fragments. Don't get me started on the spelling and grammar.
1/5

[kittyki_890]

nothing really special but it is good ^_^

[jango_dark_shadow]

its a good story but i sort of couldnt understand with that horrible grammer and spelling. if u want to be a writer than take classes. u suck!

[jango_dark_shadow]

nice.............