- I see the flames yet again and I feel so afraid but...at the same time I feel safe. But then I hear a loud crash and im woken from my dream. I slowly open my door a bit and peer out into the dark and lifless hallway. Not a soul in sight but im definatly sure I had heard something. I slowly made my way down the seemingly endless hallway and I found myself shaking, jumping at every sound and shadow, breathing had even become hard to do. I finally reatched the end og the hallway, only to find it had become extreamly cold, as though someone left a window open. I slowly slide the door open and poked my head in...it was as dark and lifeless as the hallway, except the window had been left open. I chuckled at my own simple minded fears,walked to the window and closed it. I suddenly felt another chill go up my spine as though someone was in fact in the room but as a search proved there was none there but me. I quickly headed for my room and noticed something odd...i thought that my door was left open but now it was completly shut. I thought nothing of it and went in. I suddenly stood shocked at what I found. One of the brothers was leaning across the door frame and staring at me with a kind smile....
- by II Kazuya_Shibuya II |
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- | Submitted on 02/25/2009 |
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- Title: Boken Bonds part 3
- Artist: II Kazuya_Shibuya II
- Description: srry i've been gone for a while...anyways hope its decent ^ ^"
- Date: 02/25/2009
- Tags: boken bonds part
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Comments (2 Comments)
- remalakca10 - 02/26/2009
- A few spelling errors, but nice and mysterious.
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- Nihill - 02/25/2009
- Try using spell check and making the sentences more coherent. Being readable really does add some worth to a story.
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