- Ron Sharp has had a very wonderful life, what of it he has accomplished many things. He graduated from high school with the class of 2002 with a 4.2 GPA, one of the top five smartest graduates that year! He has made a lot of friends, globally. So life has been almost perfect for him, until the night he lost what he has valued the most. He receives a call, from the police saying that his wife and children was killed. Ron isn’t told how they were killed until he walks upon the murder site himself. He is struck with fear that there is more yet to come. Ron is willing to go all the way to find the murderer(s) who killed the ones that he loved the most. Though he runs in with more trouble and conflicts with friends and family. The police doesn’t want to cooperate now that Ron is losing his sanity and his life. He runs to find these people at all costs, if it means his life will go down with what his family has already done. He wanted to kill himself, so he can be with his family. Though his friends tell him that he needs to find the people that killed his family before they kill more, on their rampage of death. He does so, though drinking to numb his pain has numbed his life. With the killers right in front of him, he does not have the strength to kill them. Multiple counters of these killers come and go, and he does not do anything about it. Until the day, the day that he decides to kill himself, and he is making the killers go with him. Though this action cannot be done, he will do it himself, putting matter into his own hands. How far will he go? Read along through this mind memorizing hell-driven experience to explore the depths of one of the most vicious people to get his life back, just to find out that there is no such thing.
- by Frozen_Fire3156 |
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- | Submitted on 01/31/2009 |
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- Title: Epilogue- Hidden Links
- Artist: Frozen_Fire3156
- Description: This is a preview of my novel. So far I've made around 20 pages(which, that really is a lot after you put it into the novel sized books) And I'm just wondering if this would sound any good? If the people here like what is written, then I MIGHT post chapter 1, I'm on Chapter 5 and I am no where near the end. So, if you're interested in this, send me a message saying you like what I have and then I'll post Chapter 1 of it. ENJOY!
- Date: 01/31/2009
- Tags: epilogue hiddenlinks novel
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Nerai Kentouken - 02/16/2009
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Ah, modern time mystery action adventure genre? hmmm, dont know quite how it works, but from what i read, it sounds interesting. You may want to separate your writing into paragraphs, to make it easier to read. 4/5!
Take a look at my entry, Its a teaser chapter from the I'm writing, sine your writing one as well, i think we have something in common. Comment and rate!
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- Tabitha Mori - 01/31/2009
- ^_^ it's pretty good bud! biggrin
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