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The Olivia right story
Olivia right was a brave little girl had a great smile and a big heart. One day Olivia was playing outside near the river bank. Her with no one she knew that she was not allowed there.
A couple of hours later her parents realized that she had never came inside. They had checked every were for her and yet she was nowhere to be found. Later in the night they gave up and called the police. They had nothing else to say but maybe she was kidnapped. But her parents wouldn’t believe that. Little did they know that she tripped on a rock and fell in the lake. The grief was too much for her parents that they died.
A new family had moved in not knowing of what has happened at the home. Slowly and gradually there children would be pulled in by Olivia’s wrath. On day the family children had went out to play. Olivia’s sweet little voice say “come with me to the river please u must save meeeeeeeeee!” her voice is so hypnotizing the kids listen and one by one they go into the river.
The next day a fisherman was fishing in the river and had found the kids bodies including a skeleton Olivia’s skeleton. After an examiner touched Olivia there was a loud scream and there was a curse place on the small village: if any children were to live in my home the will all drown in the river like I did!
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- by X_Amai_Tenshi_X |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/31/2009 |
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- Title: the Olivia write story
- Artist: X_Amai_Tenshi_X
- Description: olvia live in a small town with her mom and dad she love to play outside and had a fatal accident
- Date: 01/31/2009
- Tags: olivia write story
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Comments (3 Comments)
- leolion1200 - 03/01/2009
- it's good....but it sounds like something that came from one of my books it called "Deep, dark, and Scary" is what I think the last word is....probably not
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- X_Amai_Tenshi_X - 02/10/2009
- rate and comment please
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- meerodi - 02/01/2009
- That's kinda creepy... but it's good.
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