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One day a girl by the name of Xena was sitting by the ocean alone listening the peacefull sound of the waves. She fell asleep but when she woke up she found a totally different place . A place that was not much different at first. Xenas wondered how long it had been since fell asleep as she drowsly made her way back home. When she got home she sensed something was off but she wasn't sure what. Xena ran inside to check on her younger sister, melody. As she ran across the wooden floor she left scuffle marks. Xena stummbled to a stop at her sisters door. She found it closed. At this point she was too startled to knock and respect privacy. She gently opened the door to find ................. No one? Xena had told Melody not to go anywhere, and Melody was not one to disobay her sister/gardian. Xena started to panic the only thing she thought to do was to call 911. When Xena called the number she expected to have someone imediatly pick up, but no answer. All she got was a recording plainly stating almost mokingly that the line has been disconnected and does not exist. Startled even further she thought thet she would go down to the market and ask someone for any help at all. She ran just as her brain was. When she made to the market her worst fear was met it met, the merket was diserted. She had no where else to go and she looked down the street to the police station also no one was there. She laid down and started to cry and cry and cry intll her tears turned into the ocean and the street turned into sand and the city changed to an oceanic scape and Xena woke up to find that it had been a dream........................... PROBABLY !!!!!!!!!!
THIS IS THE FIRST OF MY STORYS PLEASE KEEP READING
- by stormysolomon |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/25/2009 |
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- Title: Mysteries Of Solitude
- Artist: stormysolomon
- Description: A girl named Xena has a visiuos and terrifying circle of events.
- Date: 01/25/2009
- Tags: mysteries solitude scary insightful
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- ForastDragomere - 06/05/2013
- Story needs a plot and character bauilding to build the suspense.We,the readers, don't know the people involved yet.Who are they? How do they know each other? What is Xena like and why is she running/dreaming? The story,so far,is like walking into the middle of a movie.And some advice for your writing skills,learn how to use proper punctuation.Your story has potential,but needs work.I look forward to see what else you have.
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