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PREFACE
What was I doing why did I decide it would be better to come live with my Uncle. This town, this small little town has changed my life, I didn’t care about boys, I had perfect straight grades but how can this town change my life. I don’t know how this boy, this town, my Uncle could change everything. I’ve had predictions that something would happen. My predictions were only flashes and are never set in concrete, so I thought they weren’t important. I should’ve explored them more. He said he loved me and I thought he was normal, but how can he be normal when he put venom in my system to change me to be a monster. I can’t go back in time and change my whole path. No I can’t do any of that, I don’t have that power and I’m lucky I have a power because he doesn’t. I look at the picture I took, I was standing right in front of the mirror but I’m not there. I look in the mirror I see my hazel irises go blacker and blacker. I’m getting thirsty. I’ll need to hunt before I attack a human fast.
- by AlmostAshleigh |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: It's Raining
- Artist: AlmostAshleigh
- Description: Emerald has visions only flashes and she moves to her Uncle Dylan's because her Dad goes around for work alot. Then Emerald meets Jasper, he seems so different and she's interested by how he is. Jasper has a secret and when he falls in love with Emerald he is so confused that he just tells her straight. But when Seth comes to town, Jasper has to do something to protect Emerald, is the only way to protect her, for Emerald to be what he is?
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: vampirepredictions
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Comments (3 Comments)
- nickycat123 - 12/31/2008
- great! ^_^5/5
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- Marie-sue - 12/27/2008
- write more. you have a good descripition, but instead of what you have for the preface, make a chapter tell us about how Emerald meets Jasper and how it comes to emerald being in danger.....do you see whereim going? Try that and see if it works. smile
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- Marie-sue - 12/27/2008
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umm, it's a little bit wierd, prefaces are a bit more actiony.
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