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So Called Haunted (Part 1)
"Mom. This is our new house?" I asked my mom.
"Ya! Don't you love it?!?" My mom said excitedly. I walk in and see a huge mess. I, as a Clean House fan, started to think of ways to make the house clean. If it was ever clean. I was going up stairs but on the way I had this cold feeling. I turn around hoping not to see anything, I see my dog Bear. He had a rope in his mouth and that meant he wanted to play. I told he to wait but he followed me. I was walking down the hall and i see this door.
"Hmm..?'' I said to myself. I open the door and I was surprised. There was wood flooring and gray walls. The walls looked so fake. I was trying to reach the wall to see if it was real or not. I couldn't reach it at first. But a half hour later, I touched it and out on nowhere I was in a hallway. I started to walk down the hall thinking if it was a dream or not. After almost one hour later I started to go crazy. I was running down the hall but there was no end. All of a sudden, A old lady appeared. I fell on top of her because I was running and she showed up.
''Oh my god! I am so sorry! I didn't know you were....''
"Shut up! What are you doing in my house?'' The lady asked.
"This is my house..." She wouldn't let me finish again.
"Your house? This is my house. I have lived in this house for a long time. Ever since my husband killed me." She said.
"You.....are.....dead?"
"Yes you dumb a**! Of course I am dead!"
"Well I am sorry that you died but this is my house. My parents payed for it."
"How much?''
"Well about, I don't know maybe ten thousand twenty thousand dollars.''
''Well then! That is much more than I payed.''
''Well it has been nice talking to you but I am very hungry and I want to wake up out of this dream.''
''Well I am sorry but this isn't a dream but if you are wanting to leave, just keep walking down the hall and touch the wall.''
"Well that sounds cheesy.'' I said to myself. I started to walk down the hall.
"Oh and remember, Joesph is still here!'' The old lady said. Who is this Joseph? Can it be her husband who murder her?
To Be Continued
- by s-_-dAfTpUnKrOxXx- |
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- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: So Called Haunted (Part 1)
- Artist: s-_-dAfTpUnKrOxXx-
- Description: This is a little thing I made up by playing with my dog Bear in my nieces room which is the room im the beginning. I will write the rest if I get votes!!
- Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: called haunted part
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- MrHott756302 - 01/01/2009
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- Sandwich Day - 12/13/2008
- its kind of weird... 3/5
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- nickycat123 - 12/10/2008
- luv it 5/5 ^_^
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