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I was but I am. What I am is not what i was. Those who knew me see the kid in the slums of the city. Those who see me now, rare as it is, see a feared man. A killer. And they are right.
I stood from my spot behind the dumpster in the ally. Id fallen asleep again. I lookd at my watch. 11:54. I still had six mineuts to get in position. Careful as not to let myself be seen I climbed the fire escape of the buliding opposit the dumpster. Jumping from rooftop to roof top I mad it to target with two mineuts to spar.
I set my cut down .50 cal. between two chimnies . This lesssened the chance of me being seen, but i still could see clearly the cities Parliment Hall. A crowd had already gathered to meet my target. No one saw me.
Until.
A womon turnd and looked directly at the rooftop i ocupied. I didnt move. I didnt even blink. Then the smiled and turned away. Had she seen? No she wasnt warning anyone. But i waited.
AT 12:03, late as usal, my target stepped out of the building and was imedeatly assaled by the crowd. I did not panic i stll had him squarly in my sights. Then the head of the cities deffence and law enforcementstepped up to greet him. I pulled the triger. BANG!!!!!!!!!!!.the target crumpled and i ran. As I ran i heard my name called after me "HALIM!!!" Thats me. The assasin.
- by patrick kuhn |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: Sadows of Light. Chaptr 1.
- Artist: patrick kuhn
- Description: This chapter i named What I Am
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: sadows light assasin target
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Comments (5 Comments)
- BeaniesFTW - 03/19/2009
- The story IS great, I meant. Sorry.
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- BeaniesFTW - 03/19/2009
- The story great, along with the voice, but grammar mistakes are so abundant, it's difficult to count. But besides that and a pretty short chapter, really good.
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- Lady Contra Mundi - 11/30/2008
- very well done Patrick.
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- potato my fries - 11/30/2008
- awsome
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- 28sharkz - 11/28/2008
- cool....nice job Pat
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