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Once there was a boy of only 16 years he was interested in science, history, and
reading. He decided to go to the old Japenese musium one day and that choice
would influence his life forever. Half way through the tour he noticed on display an
ancient mask of gray and black the other item on the same display a beutiful blue
and the last item an ancient katana still in its scabard. He looked at the case intently
the mask seeming to call out his name. He looked down at the name of the exihbit
it read "Kong Sang" he had heard that name in history class before it was the name
of a very powerful general in the times of the samurai. After his face was horribly
disfigured in the testing of a new bomb made out of gunpowder and several
chemicals he had to put on a mask that was half white and half black he gained this
scarf by killing a supposed wizard of the time of course he had figured out that magic
wasn't real. His sword was created by great sword makers of his time also said to be
as magical as his mask and scarf and better yet at a bottom part of the display case
was a medium sized gargoyle statue that was said to be able to come to life when
Kong Sang said the words "Awaken my nightmare creature!" Of course all in
Japenese. Just as he was thinking the words he was saying them out loud and all
the glass broke in the whole musium and the mask, the scarf, and the sword
atached to him and a figure of Kong Sang appeared before him "Your true name
is Riuke you are a direct decendent of the Sang dinesty you are not really Chinese
as your parents said you were you are of Japenses ancestry and now you must
stop our familys one true enemy the Mora family they are necromancers of
Japenese past their family worked against our great emperor. The enemy
appears in the body of Sanji Mora Riuke Sang this is where your journey begins."
When he opened his eyes people were staring at him in great awe fore he was
wearing a blue, black, and white jacket with a white undershirt. He was wearing
hand and feat wraps. He was also wearing a black head band and blue pants that
matched his jacket.
- by reaper57589 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/22/2008 |
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- Title: Kong Sang
- Artist: reaper57589
- Description: I wrote this part of my story shortly after the Kong Sang scarf was entered in the world of gaia. I hope to add more to this story soon but i wanted to add this part of it about my avi lol vote me good!
- Date: 10/22/2008
- Tags: kong sang
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Nerai Kentouken - 10/23/2008
- improper spelling, huge long run-on sentances, bad storyline flow, improper capatalization, i suggest going over and proofreeding this story, separate it into paragraphs and then i might be able to read it without repeatedly punching myself in the face from sheer horror. 1/5 needs lots more improvement.
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