- It was a frosty morning, and Nina walked down the long and busy path. She was wearing only a skirt, a short sleeved top, and a pair of almost destroyed tights. . She felt the rich stare at her as she walked past. Nina was blind, and depended on her sense of touch to guide her. She felt a long, satin coat bump into her, and she was knocked to the ground. She cut herself on a long piece of metal, and picked it up. Nina skimmed the out line, only to fine it was a large scythe. She suddenly felt a large ache from her back, and her vision was perfect. Full of anger, Nina stalked the stranger who bumped her until they were alone on a unfamiliar street. Nina raised the scythe, and sliced of the head. She picked up the coat and boots, put them on, and walked off. Nina was no longer human, but a demon destined to kill anyone who had pitied her.
- by Hows Your Trousers |
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- | Submitted on 10/05/2008 |
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- Title: Nina~
- Artist: Hows Your Trousers
- Description: What to do when you're bored...
- Date: 10/05/2008
- Tags: nina
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Comments (6 Comments)
- amira-0 - 11/03/2009
- i had no clue it would end that way. it was awesome
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- Hows Your Trousers - 10/05/2008
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I plan on extending this
It's just a rough sketch ^^ - Report As Spam
- II j u n i a r t II - 10/05/2008
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i think u should add more details...who was the guy that made her see again? how does she turn into a demon?
im cofuzzled @.@
but it was really good to begin with
just needs a little improvement biggrin - Report As Spam
- Yuffie07 - 10/05/2008
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I like this a lot.
I think you should describe like the colors of what she's wearing. But that's just my opinion.
Other than that I think this is very good. You should keep on writing. - Report As Spam
- Hows Your Trousers - 10/05/2008
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I really don't think that was a real comment...
Post what you like about it and how it can be improved
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- shona1 - 10/05/2008
- um um
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