Crowica

• Artist: Xix The Wind Weaver
• Description: Race Of Gaian
• Date: 08/28/2008
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A race of Not quite human not quite Crow beings that Live in the fierce Clouds of the Chaos Oceans of the Skies some are Traders of fine sky silk others are Treasure hunting Pirates who never like rules but love to fight and have things for games of chance and trickery and are Flaming Neutral, you can try to buy Passage on one of there Sky ships here are some well known ships of the Savage Skies: Sky Slasher, Lighting Spear, Air Hulk, Cloud stealer and the Wind Weaver the most well known Pirate battleship in the Savage Sky the ships are all Named after their captains in tradition and Honor Of the Crowica Race.

Comments

[firefox228]

i think its suposed to be an intro...but its all one sentance, and the one comma there isw is a comma splice, so it should be a period. its an interesting description tho. i think u should divide it up to make it easier to follow.

[Black Haiyate]

Punctuation.

[Rose_spells]

Please don't take this in offense, but I'm confused. That sounds a lot like a description over a story in itself. Please clarify for me. If this is supposed to be the story, it just doesn't make sense. Where's the action? The drama? Where's the plot? Sorry, but I'm very confused...