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I became an orphan at fifteen; my father went to war and never came home, my mother died of a broken heart. The state decided to send me to my uncle’s in the country; they took me to the train station and left me there. While sitting alone I heard a big commotion, looking up I saw three boys attacking two boys I knew from school, it was Peter and Edmund. Standing up in anger I yelled “everybody stop it!”
Everyone stood still surprised by the shout coming from a petite young woman. I asked “what is going on here? Aren’t we a little too big to fight like children?” The five boys looked at each other sheepishly walking away from each other with heads lowered. “You know she’s right I mean we are supposed to get along,” Edmund said then I smiled at him for telling everyone that I was right about my speech. I said “thanks,” he said “no problem,” reaching out to grab my hand gently. “Oh my god do I have to see this?” Lucy grimaced as she watched Edmund and myself share a moment of understanding. Then Peter said to Lucy “you’re just too little is all.” Peter being the oldest in the group rounded up the four of us, myself and his brother and sisters led us to the bench to wait. I sat next to Edmund and heard a weird sound coming from my left and said to myself “what is that?” but my thoughts were interrupted by Lucy so was Susan then peter Edmund said to Peter “but I’m not touching you” Susan asked “what is that?” Everyone stand up and looked from the right to the left then Lucy said to the others with excitement “it looks like magic!” then Susan said to us “quick everyone hold hands” Edmund said to Peter “I’m not holding your hand” Peter said “just hold on” after peter grabbed a hold of his brother’s hand Edmund grabbed my hand so after the train left we all walked out of the cave and saw the bright sun shining. We all look at each other and started running and taking off our uniforms Edmund decided to push me in the water so I said under my breath “so that’s how you want to play it” I pushed him back and yelled “ha!” Edmund said “alright then” he push’s me back and the other’s looked at us playing in the water then they decided too join us and after playing peter and susan looked at each other and nod then susan said “alright you two enough” so we go discover the ruins of cair paravel then Edmund said “I don’t remember any ruins in narnia” I say “I do” then Edmund asked “how can you remember after 1300 years in narnian time?” I respond “because I was the one that put your crown on you remember?” Edmund said “oh yeah” Alexandra said “duh.” After fighting for an hour the other three rolled their eyes. Lucy said “here they go again” Susan responded “don’t worry Lucy this won’t last long.” alexandra say’s “alright stop it you know what?” edmund response “what?” alexandra “lets just break up alright?” Edmund asked “what?” “you can’t” (reaching out grabbing my hand) I mean we’ve been together for so long why does it have to end now?” alexandra “uh yeah it does.” (Reaching out to slap his hand to get his hand off of mine) Edmund “ow” what was that for?” Alex “oh come on you know?” Edmund “fine don’t ask me to kiss you later” alex “fine!” Lucy to Susan “as you were saying?” Peter said “alright you two if you want to act like little children fine. Edmund you over there and Alex you there. Sit there and think about what you guys said to each other we’re going to get food and water.” Peter say’s to the girls “at least will have some quiet time” the girls “yes finally.” Alex “this is entirely your fault” edmund “my fault? (Getting up) You started it (Alex getting up) “how is this my fault? Even though peter said not to get up” Edmund “oh who cares what peter say’s alex “I do” Edmund “that’s because” edmund then stares at alex for a minute “you don’t mean to say you you like him?” alex “oh don’t even think about crying” Edmund starting to cry “why why do you do this to me I always thought you loved me?” alex
“I do like you” (going over to were edmund is sitting holding his hand) edmund “like me so you don’t love me?” Alex “that’s not what I mean’t I’m Sorry I did not mean to hurt you feelings.” “Sure you did that is why you like peter more then me” “I do not I love you more” Lucy said at least they finally made up you know what we should do?” peter and susan “what” “we should do a show and I know a prefect song susan “yeah I know you know a song called this is me lucy “I do oh I know what your going to do your going to put up a show this is me to show them how they should be together susan “hmm” lucy “can I help?” susan “of course lets go” at the stage susan and lucy comes up to me and ask “you ready?” alex “hmm” I go up and the music starts playing I’ve always been the kind of girl that hid my face so afraid to tell the world what I’ve got to say but I have this dream bright inside me I’m gonna to let it show its time to let you know to let you know this is real this is me I’m exactly were I’m supposed to be now gonna let the light shine on me now I’ve found who I’m there’s no way to hold in no more hiding who I want to be this me edmund "that’s alexandra” peter “yep” “but how? Lucy you did this?” lucy went to hug her brother and handed him the microphone “go get her brother” do you know what its like to feel so in the dark to dream about a life were you’re the shining star even "Though it seems like its to far away I have to believe in myself it’s the only way this is real this is me I’m exactly were I’m supposed to be now gonna let the light shine on me now I’ve found who I’m there’s no way to hold in no more hiding who I want to be this is me. (Edmund) you’re the voice I hear inside my head the reason that I’m singing I need to find you I gotta find you you’re the missing piece I need the song inside of me I need to find you (Both) I gotta find you (alex) this is real this is me (both) I’m exactly were I’m supposed to be now gonna let the light shine on me now I’ve found who I am there’s no way to hold it in no more hiding who i want to be (alex) this is me (edmund) "your the missing piece i need the song inside of me" (alex) "this is me yeah yeah" (edmund) "your the voice i hear inside my head the reason that i'm singing" (Both) "now i found who i am There's no way to hold it in no more hiding who i want to be this is me" (lifts up their hands and puts them together)
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- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: back story of narnia:prince
- Artist: athenacarebear
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i like narnia,and love edmund.my friends said i sould enter it.it took me a month.sooo rate fairly and commint fairly.and read it all!!!!
U('o')U i see u - Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: narnia
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Comments (7 Comments)
- PetitEspoir - 05/13/2009
- Watch your tenses. You vary from present to past. And use paragraph's.
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- darkwizardcatcher - 01/31/2009
- hehe...this is cute. It's got a little camp rock in it. Tho as the other girl said this needs edited better. well done, 4/5 stars. wink
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- jungle elf - 01/03/2009
- not so good...you really should think about formating this...it's so hard to figure out who is talking and whos doing what
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- ElvenFalcon - 12/27/2008
- cute. 2/5
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- athenacarebear - 08/29/2008
- i fixed it a bit so have fun commenting and rating its a fun story to read narnia rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- -iAfterDark- - 08/15/2008
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rlly cool.
i like narnia, and this story is great.
keep on goin'! - Report As Spam