- Lexi walked down the long dark road. More people starred with each passing step. Holding her bleeding arm, she couldn't take it anymore. Thinking it was the only way. She trudged to the park and fell to the ground, struggling to get up. She brought the knife up to her pale skin and slide it across. She watched the crimson liquid pour out and closed her dark blue eyes. She did it again only one tear falling, she fell over more tears following. Passing out from loss of blood she wished to only be alone. Getting her wish she died an hour later. People wept that night for all the pain and sorrow she had gone threw and all the messed up times. But now she's in a better place watching with sad eyes.
- by Polishly_Poland |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: With Sad Eyes
- Artist: Polishly_Poland
- Description: Its just a short story I wrote in my Free time. Its emoish though.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: sorrow blood lexi
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Comments (2 Comments)
- jessica4433 - 10/10/2009
- that just kinda freaked me out it waz a little emo though
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- KikuMizu - 05/11/2009
- Other than grammar check, it's pretty good. For instance, you used "threw" when you should have used "through". Word processing won't get that very well but...that's what readers are for: editing.
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