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As the gentle wind passed through the clearing that I had so gratefully found, I turned, catching beauty in its purest form.
Among the flowers and trees at the edge of the clearing stood a man, his upper half barren. A blink struck my eyes and a smile struck my lips, a shaky gulp touching my throat. Splendorous in his form, silken black hair flew from his head, spinning light from the overhead moon. I blinked once more to assure myself that I had not fallen from reality.
His God-sculpted body was alabaster in color, magnificent in its contrast to the surrounding dark. Free of scar or blemish, the body was perfection, and I found myself unable to free my eyes. Surely this demiurge was of another world, for such a deity could not exist on the same plane of existence as I, a mere mortal.
My feet took an involuntary step towards the godhead, my body pulled by this Da Vinci's gravitation. My action brought about its attention and I gasped as its stared into my soul.
Illuminative red, his eyes stared unmercifully, piercing into my comparably malleable discs. In front of this divinity, what was I but steamed butter at the edge of an ax? I melted in rapidity, bodily functions failing me.
The shiva was suddenly too close, its nose bumping against mine, a grin on its bewitching lips. I could hear my heart, its beat audible in the dead quiet of night. I was surprised I hadn't melted, but then, the immortal's hand that held to my shoulder was past my notice. All I saw was his lips, widening and clamping. My neck... I didn't flinch. I didn't so much as blink.
As the god pulled its mouth back away from my throat, I tilted my head, feeling nothing. And then I did.
Whether I screamed, cried, or whimpered, I could not tell. I could not see the hellish immortal before my eyes any longer, I didn't even comprehend my falling. All I knew was a brute, burning pain that had begun at the base of my neck.
- by Cityface McGruff |
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- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: A Broken Thread -Excerpt-
- Artist: Cityface McGruff
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Description:
What is the sight of an angel's face worth to you? Is it worth your life?
I picked this excerpt out of a few old stories I had waiting inside of my computer's hard drive and chose to submit it. - Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: vampire deity godhead
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Roswitha - 01/15/2009
- O_o Intence. I like it, very much. You write in a really nice descriptive way which reminds me of a early Anne Rice. I wouldn't mind reading more.
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- Wildwood_Dancing - 12/29/2008
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Just a bit too much for me. Tone down the description, and don't make it so dramatic.
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- Alexeray - 07/16/2008
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wow that is so tense. It gave me goose bumps
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