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In the beginning there was nothing only some gasses and few atoms were present. The overlord of this realm of nothing was Noctus, the envoy of the darkness. He watched over his realm every day, every week, every year, every century, every millenia... he was immortal after all, but even so he got bored fast. One day he sensed a power, one that was equally as strong as his... no maybe even stronger. He rushed to the place where he sensed the power, there he saw a beautiful angel. She called herself Elumia, the envoy of the light. She brought with her the stars. Entranced by the beauty of the stars, Noctus spread them everywhere in his realm. but after he was finished he got bored again and so did Elumnia, they had no other powers that they could use so they just waited and waited in hope for somebody else...
thousands and thousands milennia passed, whenever a star imploded, Elumnia made a new one. This went on for a time until once again another power came from nowhere into the universe. Noctus and Elumnia rushed over to see an mage-like person called Genesis, the envoy of the beginning. His powers amazed Noctus and Elumnia. He could create something out of nothing. He also brought with him his servants/children, the elements...
Fuegro, element of fire; Marina, element of water; Flora, element of all plantlife; Aeris, element of air; Metalica, element of metal; Teranova, element of earth; Yami, element of darkness; Hikari, element of light and Hestium, element of life.
most of them seemed to be around 17 except for Teranova who seemed to be an old man.
with some teamwork, the elements made a planet, something that Noctus and Elumnia was very interested in. Genesis agreed to make more planets on some they even made other lifeforms, although those were mortal. but al was going to change soon
Noctus and Elumnia were entranced by this new power and demanded to have a part of it. Genesis had no choice but to agree, but only under 1 condition, the Envoy's must never directly interfere with the planets. They may only use the elements. Noctus and Elumnia agreed and thus Genesis enhanced their abilities and gave them free use of the elements.
Not long after that Noctus and Elumnia decided on experimenting. Noctus created with help of Terranova countless of useless rocks in the universe, some big, some small. Elumnia then created countless of beautiful nebulas.
Noctus and Elumnia argued about which was better. Both of the envoys were so stuborn that they eventualy began a fight that ended in a draw. but still so stuborn they eventualy used the elements for an all out war, that even involved the planets...
The battle went on, countless planets and stars were destroyed. This horrified Genesis so much that he decided to get the elements back from Noctus and Elumnia. He fought hard and brave but with the elements on the side of Noctus and Elumnia it was futile. He had no choice but to make more elements to strengthen himself. and thus Electra, element of electricity; Glacia, element of ice ; Mortis, element of death; Chronus, element of time; Spacia, element of space; Diablo, element of chaos and Athenius, element of Order were born. With new strength, Genesis seemed to have the upperhand until Noctus and Elumnia joined forces and defeated Genesis. And then when things couldn't get any worse....
Suddenly a new force appeared, one with powers that were off the charts. He was Armageddon, Envoy of the end. He deemed the other envoys to be unable to lead a great empire such as the universe and began destroying the universe piece by piece. As he began ravaging the nearest planets and stars Noctus, Elumnia and Genesis could do nothing but just sit there and watch because they wasted too much power fighting eachother. When they finaly regained enough power to fight they saw that over half of the universe was already destroyed. Genesis planned to rebuilt everything with Noctus and Elumnia , but before that even started Armageddon attacked and was easily winning. The other envoys could only fall back, but Armageddon didnt alow them to escape. When all seemed lost for the other envoys they combined what little power they had and made it capable for Genesis make one of the strongest elements: Starshine, element of hope. Armageddon couldnt handle the imense powers of Starshine, But with that much positive powers there was bound to be an negative power somewhere as powerfull as Starshine...
and thus Eclipse, element of despair was born. He was first found by Armageddon and now controled by him. because of that both sides were now equaly strong. The battle seemed never ending, many planets were left to ruines because of this. These huge battles left energy surging all over the universe causing an old power to reawaken. that ancient power was left dormant before the universe even existed, maybe even before creation itself. He was Libra, envoy of balance...
When Libra was awakend, everybody stopped fighting and were stunned by the amount of power they felt. It was far greater then them all together, they felt like maggots compared to that power. Libra travelled fast and came to the battlefield with much grief. The others tried to run away from him but it was futile, Libra had the power to erease things permanently or to create things without problem. he lade sure that the envoys and the elements were unable to escape and looked at the damage, with a small gesture of his fingers the planets were all revived, it was if the battle never took place, but that was not all what he had planned...
He made a pact with the Envoys, they could roam freely around the universe and use the elements at will, as long as they do not interfere with the planets directly. If that would happen then Armageddon was alowed to destroy that planet and Genesis could then rebuilt it. Libra himself would only interfere if things got too hectic for everybody to handle, he would soon see such a problem arise...
A strange, dark and evil force slipped into the universe. the envoys all sensed this force and gathered to discuss this strange phenomena. Genesis and Armageddon felt this force sooner then anyone since they were envoy's of the beginning and ending. Libra also felt that the universal balance was tipped towards the dark side. they discussed what it could be but at that point thousands of planets and stars exploded/imploded. Dark powers shook the universe and made countless of black holes. the envoys and elements rushed to the center of this power to see a gruesome sight. the universe was cracking open and a evil stream was pouring out. Libra identified it as the coming of Mephista the envoy of evil. At that point Genesis and Armageddon remembered what had happened countless of years back. Their quest to revenge their master GanGorn and their failure to do so. Mephista has since they gained more power and destroyed other universes absorbing all the deaths and becoming the ultimate devil. In an desperate atempt to save the universe, the envoys sacrificed their life to seal Mephista, much to the disliking of the elements. but in the end they only succeeded in sealing the main force of Mephista, some pieces of his power were spread around the universe raging havoc on all planets. the current rulers, the elements now try to fight against the pieces in hope of the ressurection of the overlords...
- by olivierasseb |
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- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: The Beginning
- Artist: olivierasseb
- Description: Well this is a story I made up about a year ago. I have already submitted it on some other websites, but the username should be the same, unless stolen offcourse. It's one of my first stories I've come up with and where I sticked to the basics, not adding too much detail, just keeping it raw. And although I don't think it's much, some friends pressured me to submit this, so here it is.
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: origin creation fiction gods quest
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Comments (4 Comments)
- leeah iss tha name - 12/28/2008
- ......................wow
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- olivierasseb - 07/20/2008
- c'mon people! I know it's not the best, but won't anyone read it?
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- olivierasseb - 07/16/2008
- Ty! Yeah I know, I usually do that for some reason... Thanks for the good criticism though =D
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- The Size of Your Fist - 07/15/2008
- not bad, the flows is a little off kilter, but a really good story
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