- Kids go out and play I laugh at there stuipdy. What's so great about the world. The only thing I respect is DEATH!!!! I laugh at the goverment, I laugh at the schools, I laugh at humans. I pray for the dead bodys for them to stay there and stay dead,people wonder what I'm doing I planning to make people go on there knees and beg for mercy so tell them I stay here watching the fools have fun. Who knows I might go after you twisted !
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- | Submitted on 06/24/2010 |
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- Title: what i awalys think
- Artist: guts_n_gore
- Description: I chose to share my feelings cause im bored and its what other douchebags do so yeah enjoy...
- Date: 06/24/2010
- Tags: poem time
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- Cyrus The Keeper - 06/30/2012
- This is simply terrible. Also, this is a Fiction category and if these are your feelings they belong in nonfiction.
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- BroodyElves - 05/10/2012
- Punctuation and correct spelling please. At some parts it just seems like you're trying too hard to sound creepy, and not really thinking much about what kind of emotions you're conveying to the reader. It vaguely reminds me of one of Carol Ann Duffy's poems ("Today I am going to kill something..." wink but you need to improve how you deliver your writing.
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- Creed of Passion - 01/08/2012
- You're a freak.
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- InAmberClad117 - 07/02/2011
- I feel like this too after watching Fox News too.
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- Wind-Blown Dandilion - 06/22/2011
- creepy
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