- by Keiseki-san |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 10/12/2011 |
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- Title: Helyas for AyumuNakashima
- Artist: Keiseki-san
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Description:
A quick sketch for an OC request on TM.
Note: Guys, if you have to rate, I'd appreciate it if comments are made for them -especially if they're low ratings- since I need to know if there's anything else I needed to work on. I usually just average a 3.5, so yeah. Thanks! ^^ - Date: 10/12/2011
- Tags: helyas ayumunakashima
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Keiseki-san - 10/13/2011
- Oops. XD I'll take note of that. Thanks a lot! I barely get any comments and well-placed critiques, so yours is appreciated, Parfait! :3 I forgot to shade the legs! Lol! I hadn't noticed! Thanks!
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- Fruity-Parfait - 10/12/2011
- because it looks a tad bit flat unless it goes against your style or something. There's not many fabric folds but the few that are there are very nice. keep up the great work. you are a wonderful artist!
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- Fruity-Parfait - 10/12/2011
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what the heck... you average a 3.5? this is amazing. I love how it is so damn clean. your style is wonderful definitely ranging in 4-5.
okay now for the criticism :
Your eyes are nicely shaped and shaded but you have to be more careful about where it is placed specifically the right eye (smaller one)
and it's pupil because he looks like he is looking in two different directions. And as i said before i appreciate how clean it is but there should be some shading behind his legs at least - Report As Spam
