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  • OC 001
  • Title: OC 001
  • Artist: Hi im Riven
  • Description: PSE7, Bamboo Pen & Touch Tablet
    Desc; Done on paper, then colored digitally. First OC I've ever finished, colored.
    PS: I personnally, don't care about your 5-star-vote, only about why you gave me that score. If you're planning to click 1/5 well, I deserve to know why. Don't vote poorly "just 'cause" and leave it at that.
    I consider those types of people as low-lives and conceded creatures, unworthy of living a life. So if you ARE one of them, you've been exiled from vewing any of my work. :)
  • Date: 01/29/2010
  • Tags: photoshop original character anime pirate
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Neigeux - 02/22/2010
  • you should of added more detail to the ponytail, it just looks like a blog. the right side of her face is draw too outward, makes her head look way too wide. her neck looks weird on the left side, like it's connecting to nothing. otherwise it's nice
  • Hi im Riven - 02/05/2010
  • @Hinata Dolphin: OF COURSE, HER PONYTAIL'S WEIRD!!! Dude (-et) check the reference then tell me if it's still weird! I'm just trying to make it as similar as possible... (sheesh) =.= heheh, well no duh, there's no nose! Big surprise! XP could you get anymore obvious?! hah.
    @Wolfcags13: Yeah, I got lazy and just left the nose. ;3 Nah, just kidding. But yeah, this was at first just a sketch, but then I thought it was good enough to color, so I had no time to add on..
  • Wolfcags13 - 02/02/2010
  • I think it's a fine drawing. If I had to point out anything, then maybe the nose could be a little more.... there? I don't know exactly how to say it, but then again, the reference has no nose so maybe not XD I really like the eyes though, they really stand out to me. 4/5
  • Hinata Dolphin - 02/01/2010
  • The ponytail on her hair looks a little weird, the neck is a little too thick on the left side and her eyes are fine but up a little too far...by like a couple centimeters and I personally think she needs an indication that she has a nose like maybe below that long bang or on the left side. just minor things that can be improved through practice. 3/5
  • mind poo - 01/31/2010
  • I think the eyes are fine, it's just the hir that's bothering me a bit. owo Rest is totally good.
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