- by Lilium_nocturne |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 06/06/2009 |
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- Title: Taka and Sky
- Artist: Lilium_nocturne
- Description: My Yakuza character and the girl that hangs with him. A few things are a little wonky, like Sky's lower body and her gum, but overall I like it.
- Date: 06/06/2009
- Tags: taka yakuza japan tokyomisfits
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Comments (7 Comments)
- I Be Athena - 06/03/2010
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I agree with iSniff Magic Marker. You have potental, like in the background! The shading and graffiti were great. But, the people need a little work. The boy was pretty good except that his knees were to low and poked out from the pants too much for those kinds of jeans. On the girl, she looked a little too manly. Like her shoulders, they were too wide, her waist too narrow. Her head was also a little too small and her knees to low; long legs will also help the physique. Keep Drawing
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- madde-4 - 01/23/2010
- to big tits to big and short legs to small head the girl have man arms
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- Yandere Neko - 08/12/2009
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It's not ugly, it just could use some work. You know, I think that if you made the girl's legs longer it would really improve it. Her neck to her waist isn't bad, and if it was balanced out by longer legs it would look proportionally more accurate. You drew the boy much better.
And don't listen to people who just like to leave mindless hate comments like "terrible" and "ugly." You have potential, keep that in mind ^_^ - Report As Spam
- Pallid Vibrance - 07/28/2009
- Okay. Her arms are rather large, her shoulders are broad, he hips and waist are low. He knees are then low, he boobs are too low and really not proportional.. And a bit in the middle O_O And something about one of his legs are wacky.
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- notaguyperson - 06/29/2009
- terrible
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- Kadiva - 06/08/2009
- pretty good
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