- Title: Kai
- Artist: MexaMix
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Description:
my fist submission!
just a drawing I did one day, and I liked it, so I decided to submit it.
constructive criticism welcomed.
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: fire anime
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Nerai Kentouken - 01/24/2010
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2: Feet. Observe your own feet, how big they are in relation to some other body part, and memorize it.
3: Eyes. You placed the nose and mouth correctly, but the eyes aretoo big and too high. Look up how to place eyes and what guidelines to use. it helps alot!
With practice you'll get there! Take a look at my drawn art here too, it may be useful to study. - Report As Spam
- Nerai Kentouken - 01/24/2010
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It's a well thought out drawing, i like the essence and the pose overall.
here are some things you need to work on:
1: the hands and feet. I know how hard it is to get the size of those pesky things right, but here's a trick. a hand should always be able to cover your characters face vertically half-way(from the bottom of the palm equal tot he chin, to the tip of the middle finger near the hairline.) - Report As Spam
- Rin Rin Kagamine - 06/25/2009
- Bigger hands and bigger feet are my main problems. Always draw big boots!
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- xchobits xxlove - 01/13/2009
- good try! 2.5/5
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- GianellaBaby - 01/10/2009
- No real nice comment... sorry...
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- Nick_Naughty13 - 01/10/2009
- I dont know why, but I actully really like this o-o. Its different, and I like whatevers in her hands..I think thats what I like the most, the glowing thing in the hands smile
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- Lani224 - 08/29/2008
- this does need some work... 1. theres small hands 2. the eyes are too big 3.the foot doesnt have enogh arch, 4. theres no boobs or a butt 5.its not a comic... and last,... i can draw way better than that, but keep workin at it, youl get it one dat (not...)
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