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  • Title: okami
  • Artist: Your sleeping death
  • Description: please no bad comments, i know i messed up on the eyes
  • Date: 03/04/2011
  • Tags: okami
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Savior_ofunsafespirits - 04/27/2011
  • Hm, this could be better, but it's not as bad as MizGr was saying. I get what she was saying about the face, but the nose itself looks perfect and the ears look fine to me. All in all, I'd give it a 4.5 out of five, but they don't give you that option, so I'll round up! ^_^
  • Payton Leeroy - 03/12/2011
  • Okay, I 'm sure you will see this as a "bad comment", but it is actually called a critique, and it's designed to try and help you.
    The nose is low and odd shaped and the ears are off. I suggest getting with some dogs in real life and doing some sketches of them.
    Please stop using mechanical or 2b pencils. Look in the range of 6-9b, or perhaps an ebony or charcoal. They'll give you a nicer black, which will make your image that much stronger. Pick a light source and added some shadows.
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